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Chapter 3: What the Deed Actually Said

Jasmine sat on the edge of her bed for a long time, the paper in her hands.

$6,400.

Written in red ink.

Like a warning.

Like a verdict.

She read the list again.

Bread and butter from two Tuesdays ago.

A bottle of conditioner.

One load of laundry.

Jessica had written down the date next to each item, the price, even a small note beside the shampoo that read: *name brand, not generic.*

Jasmine set the paper face-down on her nightstand and stared at the ceiling.

Her phone buzzed.

Her best friend, Carla.

*"You okay?

You went quiet."*

Jasmine typed back: *"I'll call you tomorrow."*

She didn't sleep.

---

In the morning, David was already at the kitchen table with his coffee when Jasmine came downstairs.

Jessica was not in the room.

The house was quiet in the particular way it got when Jessica was listening from somewhere close.

Jasmine placed the list on the table in front of her father.

David picked it up.

He read the first line.

Then the second.

His jaw tightened.

"Where did you get this?"

"She slipped it under my arm last night.

After you went upstairs."

David set the paper down slowly.

"She said pay or pack permanently," Jasmine said.

"Those were her exact words.

She wrote them at the bottom."

David didn't answer right away.

He turned the paper over, then back again, like he was making sure he'd read it correctly.

"Dad." Jasmine pulled out the chair across from him and sat down.

"I need to ask you something, and I need you to be honest with me."

He looked up.

"Is this still my house?

Legally?

Because she talks like she owns it.

She talks like she has some kind of power here that I don't know about."

David's expression shifted.

Something moved behind his eyes that Jasmine didn't like.

"Jasmine—"

"Dad.

Please."

He wrapped both hands around his coffee mug.

"When your mother passed," he said slowly, "the house was left to me.

Completely.

I was the sole owner."

"Was," Jasmine said.

He looked at her.

"You said was."

The kitchen was very quiet.

"When Jessica and I got married," David said, "she asked me to add her name to the deed.

She said it was about security.

About feeling like this was her home too." He paused.

"I thought it was reasonable."

Jasmine felt something cold settle in her chest.

"So her name is on the deed."

"Yes."

"How much of the house does she own?"

David set down his mug.

"It's joint tenancy.

Equal shares."

The word *equal* sat between them like a stone dropped into still water.

Jasmine understood now why Jessica had smiled that cold, thin smile the night before.

She understood why the threat had been so quiet and so confident.

Jessica didn't need to shout.

She had half the house in her name.

"Dad," Jasmine said carefully, "did she know about the deed before she married you, or did she push for it after?"

David opened his mouth.

Then closed it.

"She brought it up about three months after the wedding," he said.

"She said she'd spoken to a friend who told her that without her name on the property, she had no legal standing if anything happened to me."

"And you believed her."

"She was my wife."

Jasmine looked at the list on the table.

At the red ink at the bottom.

*Pay or pack permanently.*

"Dad," she said, "I don't think she married you for security."

He didn't answer.

But his hands tightened around the mug, and that told Jasmine everything she needed to know.

She picked up the list.

Folded it once.

Slid it into the pocket of her hoodie.

"I'm going to keep this," she said quietly.

She was already thinking about what it might be worth later.

---

That afternoon, Jasmine called Carla and told her everything.

Carla was twenty-two and had worked for a year as a paralegal before switching jobs.

She wasn't a lawyer.

But she knew things.

"Joint tenancy," Carla repeated.

"Yes."

"Equal shares.

And they're still married."

"Yes."

Carla was quiet for a moment.

"Jasmine, if your dad were to pass away, the house wouldn't go to you.

Under joint tenancy with right of survivorship, his share goes automatically to her."

The phone felt heavy in Jasmine's hand.

"So she gets everything."

"Unless your dad changes the deed.

Or unless there's a will that overrides it — which in some states it can't, not with joint tenancy." Carla paused.

"I'm not a lawyer.

You need an actual lawyer.

But yes.

That's the general picture."

Jasmine stood at her bedroom window, looking out at the yard her mother had planted.

The rosebush along the fence.

The stepping stones her mother had laid herself, one summer afternoon when Jasmine was six years old.

"She's been planning this," Jasmine said.

"Hasn't she."

Carla didn't answer right away.

"The list she gave you," Carla finally said.

"Keep it safe.

And start writing down every single thing she says or does from now on.

Date, time, exact words.

Everything."

Jasmine already had the list in her pocket.

But what Carla said next made the room feel smaller.

"Jasmine — does your dad have a will?"

The rosebush outside blurred slightly.

"I don't know," Jasmine said.

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"Find out," Carla said.

"Soon."

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