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Chapter 6: The Attorney and the Evidence

My attorney's name was Carol Nguyen.

I had worked with her remotely for three years — she had handled the property documentation, the mortgage transfers, the certified letters.

She answered on the second ring.

"I was wondering when you'd call," she said.

"You heard?"

"Derek's cousin contacted my office this morning.

Left a message about adverse possession.

I've been waiting to hear your side."

"What did you tell him?"

"Nothing yet.

I wanted to talk to you first." A pause.

"Tell me everything."

I told her.

The folding bed.

The chore schedule.

The bank statements.

The bruises.

The text from Melissa.

The property buyer at two in the morning.

The document my mother had been tricked into signing.

Carol was quiet for a moment after I finished.

"The document your mother signed," she said.

"Do you have a copy?"

"Not yet.

Derek said Melissa handled it.

I haven't found it in the house."

"We need that document.

If it exists, it's either fraudulent on its face — wrong property description, missing notarization, improper witness — or it was obtained through misrepresentation, which voids it regardless.

Either way, it doesn't threaten your ownership.

But I want to see it."

"How do I get it?"

"Ask Derek directly.

Tell him you need it for your records.

Don't explain why.

If he refuses, that tells us something too."

"And the adverse possession claim?"

Carol made a short sound that wasn't quite a laugh.

"It won't hold.

Two years is nowhere near the statutory minimum in your state, and the moment you placed that deed on the table last night you formally asserted ownership.

That clock resets to zero.

Derek's cousin knows this.

He's bluffing, or he's incompetent."

"Melissa isn't bluffing," I said.

"She's stalling."

"Yes," Carol said.

"She is.

She wants you in a long dispute because a long dispute costs you time and money and gives her leverage to negotiate a settlement.

She's hoping you'll pay her to leave."

"I'm not paying her anything."

"Good.

Then here's what we do." She walked me through it.

A formal eviction notice, properly served, giving them the legally required period to vacate.

A cease-and-desist letter regarding the Social Security account withdrawals.

A report to Adult Protective Services regarding the physical @buse — Carol's word, not softened — and the financial exploitation.

And a request to Derek, in writing, for the document my mother had signed.

"The APS report is important," Carol said.

"Not just for your mother's protection.

It creates an official record.

If Melissa tries to claim this is a family dispute about property, the APS record makes it something else entirely."

"What does it make it?"

"A pattern," Carol said.

"And patterns are harder to argue away than single incidents."

I wrote everything down.

That evening, I found the document myself.

I wasn't searching for it.

I was looking for my mother's reading glasses, which she said she'd left in the kitchen drawer — the same drawer where I'd found the bank statements the night before.

The document was underneath a takeout menu, folded in thirds.

It was one page.

My mother's signature was at the bottom, shaky and slightly smeared, the way her handwriting went when she was nervous.

The document described itself as a "Family Property Sharing Agreement." It listed my mother as the primary resident and Derek and Melissa as co-residents with equal rights to occupy and manage the property.

There was no notarization.

There was no independent witness signature — only Melissa's, listed as a "household witness."

And the property address was wrong.

One digit off in the street number.

I photographed it on my phone and sent it to Carol.

Her reply came back in four minutes.

*This is not legally enforceable.

Not even close.

Keep the original.

Don't let it leave the house.*

I folded it back exactly as I had found it and put it under the takeout menu.

Then I went to find Derek.

He was in the backyard, sitting in one of the patio chairs, staring at the garden.

He had a glass of water in his hand that he hadn't touched.

"I found the document," I said.

He didn't look surprised.

"The address is wrong," I said.

"Did you know that?"

"No."

"The notarization is missing.

The witness is Melissa herself."

He set the glass down on the arm of the chair.

It tipped slightly.

He caught it.

"Derek.

Did you read it before Mom signed it?"

A long pause.

"No," he said.

"She thought it was a household expense agreement."

"I know."

"You know," I said.

"You've known this whole time."

He looked up at me then, and what I saw in his face was not the calculation from the night before.

It was something older and more tired.

The face of someone who had told himself a story for two years and was only now, in the quiet of the backyard, running out of ways to believe it.

"I'm sorry," he said.

It was the first time in two days he had said it.

It wasn't enough.

Not yet.

But it was real.

"The eviction notice will be served tomorrow," I said.

"You have the legally required period to make arrangements.

I'd suggest you use the time."

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I went back inside.

Through the kitchen window, I could see him still sitting there in the dark, the untouched glass of water catching the last of the evening light.

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