Chapter 4: The Man Who Came to Her Hospital Room

I wrote the name down before I went back to the kitchen.
Curtis.
Mom had remembered it without being prompted.
She hadn't been confused.
She'd been lied to, deliberately, by a man who had walked into her hospital room six days after her stroke and told her that her daughter had already agreed.
Daniel was still on the phone with Grace Holloway when I came back.
I slid the notepad across the table to him.
He read it, nodded once, and said into the phone: "Add hospital access to the list.
He approached the seller in the facility.
Yes.
Before discharge."
I poured the ruined soup down the drain and started over with what we had.
Eggs.
Toast.
It didn't matter.
By the time I brought food to Mom and came back, Daniel had his laptop open and three documents side by side on the screen.
"Grace wants originals," he said.
"Not the email copies Evan sent.
She says if the notary stamp is fraudulent, the original document may show physical signs — pressure inconsistency, ink variation, date irregularities.
The email scan won't show that."
"How do we get the originals?"
"The county recorder's office has the filed deed.
That's public record — we can pull it ourselves tomorrow morning." He scrolled without looking up.
"The power of attorney and the closing disclosure are different.
Those would be held by the title company or Preel's brokerage."
"Evan has copies."
"Evan sent us copies," Daniel said.
"Which means he controls what we've seen." He finally looked up.
"Grace is filing a records preservation request tonight.
It prevents the title company from destroying or altering anything while we investigate."
"Can she do that without a case number?"
"She's done it before.
She knows the right judge." He paused.
"She also wants to know if your mother is willing to give a statement."
I thought about Mom in the guest room, folding her hands the way she did in church.
"Yes," I said.
"She'll give a statement."
My phone buzzed again.
Evan.
*I'm serious, Lauren.
You're going to make this worse.
Call me.*
Daniel read it over my shoulder.
"Don't call him," he said.
"Don't text back.
From this point, anything you say to Evan is potentially evidence or potentially used against us.
Let him talk to Grace."
"He doesn't know about Grace yet."
"He will soon enough."
I put the phone in a drawer.
The next morning, Daniel and I were at the county recorder's office when it opened at eight.
The clerk pulled the deed in four minutes.
Daniel stood at the counter and read it without touching it, then asked for a certified copy.
On the drive home, he held the copy in his lap and read it again.
"The notary stamp is dated a Thursday," he said.
"Is that significant?"
"Your mother was admitted to the hospital on a Monday.
Her discharge summary says she was assessed as cognitively impaired through at least the following Tuesday." He folded the copy carefully.
"The closing was notarized on the Thursday between those two dates."
I kept both hands on the wheel.
"She was legally incapacitated," I said.
"Arguably, yes.
Which means even if the signature were real — and I don't believe it is — the closing may be voidable on capacity grounds alone." He looked out the window.
"Grace is going to want this date."
My phone rang through the car speakers.
Unknown number.
Daniel said, "Answer it."
I did.
A man's voice, smooth and unhurried: "Is this Lauren Marsh?"
"Who's calling?"
"My name is Curtis Preel.
I understand there's been some confusion about your mother's property sale.
I'd love to clear things up directly, if you have a few minutes."
Daniel's hand came up flat — *don't speak* — and he was already reaching for his own phone.
"Mr.
Preel," I said carefully, "I think you should speak with our attorney."
A short pause.
"You've retained an attorney?
Lauren, this really isn't necessary.
Your mother was very clear about her wishes.
I have notes from our meeting."
"Then you can share those notes with our attorney," I said.
"Her name is Grace Holloway."
The line went quiet for three full seconds.
"I see," Preel said.
And then he hung up.
Daniel was already texting Grace.
His thumbs moved fast.
May you like
*Preel just called Lauren directly.
He knows we're moving.*