Chapter 5: The Woman Who Sent the Message
Madeline stared at the screen until it went dark.
Then she turned the brightness down as low as it would go and read the message again.
*He's done this before.*
She looked at Preston.
His head had dropped to one side, his breathing slow and even.
Poppy was still.
Claire's eyes were closed.
Madeline typed one word back.
*Who is this?*
The reply came in under a minute.
*My name is Dana Whitfield.
I was married to Preston for three years.
I need to speak with you.
Not by text.
Please.*
Madeline's chest was very tight.
She typed: *How did you get this number?*
*I've been watching for something to happen.
I hoped I was wrong.
I wasn't.
Please.
I can come to the hospital in the morning.
I'll explain everything.*
She looked at her husband again.
The man who had brought her coffee and apple juice.
The man who had held her hand and said *we can talk about everything tomorrow* in a voice that sounded like concern.
She typed: *Come at nine.
Ask for room 14.
Don't use your real name at the desk.*
Then she locked her phone and placed it face-down on the blanket.
She did not sleep for the rest of the night.
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Dana Whitfield arrived at eight fifty-three.
She was perhaps forty, with dark circles under her eyes that suggested she hadn't slept either.
She gave the name Morrison at the desk and was shown to room 14 by a nurse who didn't ask questions.
Claire had taken Poppy to the cafeteria for breakfast.
Preston had gone home to shower and change, promising to return by ten.
The room was quiet when Dana sat down.
"I'll say it plainly," Dana said.
"I don't have time to say it any other way." She set a manila envelope on the bed.
"Four years ago, I was where you are now.
Except I was in a different hospital, and I didn't wake up as quickly as you did."
Madeline looked at the envelope.
She didn't touch it yet.
"What happened to you?"
"The doctors called it an accidental overdose.
I had a history of anxiety, I was on medication, and Preston was very good at explaining that I sometimes mixed things up." Dana's voice was flat and practiced, the voice of someone who had told this story before and learned to keep the feeling out of it.
"He had a woman in the house too.
Her name wasn't Serena.
But the setup was the same."
"How did you survive?"
"My daughter called a neighbor.
She was six." Dana paused.
"Preston didn't know she'd seen him in the kitchen."
The room was very quiet.
"He left me after I recovered," Dana continued.
"He told everyone I'd had a breakdown.
That I was unstable.
That he'd tried everything." She opened the envelope and laid three documents on the bed.
"I spent two years trying to prove what he'd done.
The police said there wasn't enough evidence.
His lawyer was very good.
But I kept everything."
Madeline looked at the documents.
Medical records.
A toxicology report.
A photograph of a small glass bottle, identical in shape to the one Detective Ruiz had taken from Preston's jacket.
"The label," Madeline said.
"Chloral hydrate.
Prescribed to a woman named Karen Stills." Dana pointed to the toxicology report.
"Karen Stills was Preston's assistant at the time.
She reported her prescription stolen six weeks before my hospitalization.
The police never connected it."
Six weeks.
"He plans it that far in advance," Madeline said.
"At least." Dana folded her hands in her lap.
"I don't know what he wants from you specifically.
With me it was the house and a life insurance policy he'd taken out eight months before."
Madeline said nothing.
She was thinking about the paperwork she had signed last spring without reading it carefully.
"I'm not here to frighten you," Dana said.
"I'm here because I have a daughter, and you have a daughter, and I know what it looks like when a child learns to be very careful around her father."
Madeline thought of Poppy's face in the hospital chair.
That particular stillness.
"She told the detective about the bottle," Madeline said quietly.
Dana looked at her.
"Then she's braver than either of us were."
Madeline picked up the toxicology report.
Her name was not on it.
But the bottle in the photograph was the same bottle.
The prescription date was six weeks before Dana's hospitalization, just as the label on Madeline's bottle had been issued six weeks before today.
Same method.
Same timing.
Same man.
"Will you give these to Detective Ruiz?" Madeline asked.
"I'll give her everything I have." Dana stood.
"But I need to know you're not going to warn him first."
Madeline looked at the door.
Preston would be back in an hour.
"I won't warn him," she said.
Dana picked up her coat.
At the door she stopped.
"One more thing." She turned back.
"Serena.
Whatever her real name is.
She's not acting alone, but she's not the one you need to be afraid of." She paused.
"She's the one who'll talk first when she realizes he'll let her take the fall."
The door closed.
Madeline sat with the documents in her lap and listened to the sound of the hospital corridor outside.
May you like
Somewhere down the hall, she could hear Poppy laughing at something Claire had said.
She picked up her phone and called Detective Ruiz.
